Passion's Killing Floor

I read it in my 10th grade english class. We also watched the movie. It disturbed me and I would never like to read it again. :( Though I do ...

lol, i think guys in general are sexy when they're angry. well, when they're angry for a good reason, like when Edward was protecting Bella. It's fun to watch guys ...

It could use work. In my opinion it's incoherent. Consider taking out all the periods. It crowds the poem and takes away from it's simplicity. Unless you wanted to make ...

This is wonderful. I especially like the last line. It could use a little more description, so that one may clearly picture the horrors of war. Simply an opinion, perhaps ...

It was the future, or something like that. (Something I spouted in class one day and my friend actually decided to use it an opening line for his story. Lol)

A coffee skinned Jewish girl with long black hair that solves mysteries. She enjoys carrying around a funky messanger bag and always gets in people's faces with her almighty magnifying ...

It sounds like a story about Scottish/Irish settlers near the Appalachians(sp?) during the French and Indian War or a spunky out of the norm girl that runs around town after ...

I would choose the desert island and gladly delve into madness with God as my only company. Perhaps a banana or two. Yes. Yu and Ai shall be their names. ...

M.S. Crawford for the win. It rolls off the tongue nicely. I'm going to write in both my pen name and real name. It really depends on what I'm writing. ...

Madora sounds menacing... Look at small things like the meaning of words. From many languages, it's origins, etc. That can help you out. Look up the Greek or Latin words ...

Another thing to consider is taking a look at the small publishers that don't require you to have an agent. Other than the fact that they publish very few books ...

A pocket watch with something special hidden with in it. That would be neat.

It needs a little bit more originality. Think "What can I do to make this one stand out from all the other Angel/Demon novels/stories?" Give those readers something new to ...

I prefer Bella and Edward, mostly because I can actually relate to their relationship more and have experienced that sudden clicking and the hearts and rainbows more than the other ...

Sigfried and Roy.